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Killer Déjà Vu
looking into her eyes I draw in gracefully
dropping a potion in the wine she drinks
the voices in the background start to drown
red lips smirk from some word play
feeling her digits rub up against my forearm
I cringefully bite down on my tongue
unholy urges arise from the depths of me
it's essential to get her to fall into my web
with sweet words -“let’s get out of here”
I take her back to my apartment
opening the door for such a sexy temptress
taking in the sweet smell of perfume
as she walk in
I close the door then all turns dark
now she becomes my prey
no more the well mannered man
I’m now an emotionless predator
grabbing a hammer
then ramming it against her skull
please forgive me hunnie
I blame society
while she lays there unconscious
I lift up her dress and pull off her panties
taking my raging erection
then sliding it between her legs
I push my head up against hers
as I breathe hard into her ear
thrusting back and forth
to my surprise she starts to speak
she says - "beep!* beep!* beep!*"
I awake in a daze
all seems hazy as I hear a loud knock
trying to regain my vision
I stumble up “was this all just a dream?”
opening the door to see her standing there
she smiles and says
-“are you ready for our date?”
dropping a potion in the wine she drinks
the voices in the background start to drown
red lips smirk from some word play
feeling her digits rub up against my forearm
I cringefully bite down on my tongue
unholy urges arise from the depths of me
it's essential to get her to fall into my web
with sweet words -“let’s get out of here”
I take her back to my apartment
opening the door for such a sexy temptress
taking in the sweet smell of perfume
as she walk in
I close the door then all turns dark
now she becomes my prey
no more the well mannered man
I’m now an emotionless predator
grabbing a hammer
then ramming it against her skull
please forgive me hunnie
I blame society
while she lays there unconscious
I lift up her dress and pull off her panties
taking my raging erection
then sliding it between her legs
I push my head up against hers
as I breathe hard into her ear
thrusting back and forth
to my surprise she starts to speak
she says - "beep!* beep!* beep!*"
I awake in a daze
all seems hazy as I hear a loud knock
trying to regain my vision
I stumble up “was this all just a dream?”
opening the door to see her standing there
she smiles and says
-“are you ready for our date?”
Published 19th Oct 2024
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19th Oct 2024 3:26pm
20th Oct 2024 9:01am
Thank you, friend 😁
I wrote a very rough version of this poem many years ago. It was always meant to be a two parter but I just never finished it. Well, until today haha.
It's always lovely reading your comments. Much appreciated.
I wrote a very rough version of this poem many years ago. It was always meant to be a two parter but I just never finished it. Well, until today haha.
It's always lovely reading your comments. Much appreciated.
