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Lifelong Best Fuck Ever
To her daddy she was perfect, innocent, and sweet
To me she was sexy, a spicy piece of meat
She’d flash that smile and make me hard
Then raise her legs with no holes were barred
She’d smile so pretty and spread out wide
She liked it when I came inside
To me she was so sweet and clever
She was my life-long, best fuck ever
To me she was sexy, a spicy piece of meat
She’d flash that smile and make me hard
Then raise her legs with no holes were barred
She’d smile so pretty and spread out wide
She liked it when I came inside
To me she was so sweet and clever
She was my life-long, best fuck ever
Published 18th Oct 2024
Author's Note
I revised an earlier poem based on my recent lover who now holds this position of honor.
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18th Oct 2024 4:34pm
you two seem to have an expectational relationship... good for you... great poem by the way
18th Oct 2024 6:34pm
Congrats for having a new lover.
This is a raw poem with good rhyming and rhythm - being it's only two stanzas long.
The pic adds to the arousal meter for those that enjoy saucy photos for sure.
Suggestion: Take out the word 'were.' It flows better without it.
Then raise her legs with no holes barred.
Nice one.
This is a raw poem with good rhyming and rhythm - being it's only two stanzas long.
The pic adds to the arousal meter for those that enjoy saucy photos for sure.
Suggestion: Take out the word 'were.' It flows better without it.
Then raise her legs with no holes barred.
Nice one.
18th Oct 2024 9:05pm
