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during my lifetime
i watch
the leaves
float
on the water
then slowly
drift away,
each one
a hope,
a dream
i had
wished for
during my
lifetime.
the leaves
float
on the water
then slowly
drift away,
each one
a hope,
a dream
i had
wished for
during my
lifetime.
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Re: Re. during my lifetime
16th Oct 2024 10:38am
Re: Re. during my lifetime
16th Oct 2024 11:21am
Re. during my lifetime
16th Oct 2024 12:00pm
If I knew you in the real world I’d sit with you while you watched those leaves. Idk if you’d want that, but it was the first thought that came to mind when I read this.
Sometimes I still need a filter but sometimes I don’t care.
InDreamz was correct, this is very touching, wolf.
Sometimes I still need a filter but sometimes I don’t care.
InDreamz was correct, this is very touching, wolf.
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Re: Re. during my lifetime
16th Oct 2024 12:14pm
Re. during my lifetime
Anonymous
16th Oct 2024 2:03pm
Wonderful. A new favorite.
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16th Oct 2024 4:22pm
Re. during my lifetime
17th Oct 2024 2:23am
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