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In The Dead Of October
In the deep blue yonder
Where the dusty pathways meander
The mist is thick
In the dead of October
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The lark hovers in the sky
A pair of happy butterflies
There's dancing and singing
A moment of heaven is passing by
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The blue mountain's majestic height
The pastures down, sleeping quite
Shepherds and silent flocks
A divine harmony, under God's light
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In October, yellow flowers grow
A clear autumn day, sun's aglow
Spring has left some shine,
To keep some more for the morrows
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The space is flat, and widely clear
Natures beauty nothing ever may smear
Where man has not trod.
There the truth is what shall appear
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In the mountain beyond the forest edge
After the sylvan spirits, aloes and sedge
Where the pines grow, evergreen
Along and far in the distance, have i to trudge
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Up to the oaken temple of the sacred tree
And the olden primitive dolmen cemetery
Where told, sleeps the ancient treasury
And the bone remains of the roman majesty
Published 14th Oct 2024
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14th Oct 2024 10:54am
This is lovely writing Hamid. The scenery in October is beautiful. I’m sure autumn has inspired a lot of poets.
14th Oct 2024 10:57am
Oh, yes, absolutely !
i am October born poet, with such nostalgia for the past and that misty landscapes in the far beyond...
Happy you liked this Evera my friend. spend very good times..
i am October born poet, with such nostalgia for the past and that misty landscapes in the far beyond...
Happy you liked this Evera my friend. spend very good times..
14th Oct 2024 11:00am
14th Oct 2024 11:03am
23 October next week, and i hope everybody is having good times,
living happy moments with friends and poetry as well..
Happy birthday to us.
living happy moments with friends and poetry as well..
Happy birthday to us.
14th Oct 2024 11:05am
14th Oct 2024 11:06am
ah, alas, i missed yours. hope you had so much fun my friend.
and thanks for the wishes given, stay safe and active forever. Hamid
and thanks for the wishes given, stay safe and active forever. Hamid
14th Oct 2024 11:07am
October poet, innately composing what he feels and sees of Nature.. Born to paint portraits and landscapes from what you cherish, believe in and mostly love.. You give authentic voices to all that is in Mother Nature carving it in so fine amazing poetry! God bless you October poet.
Sometimes, the words ever so eloquent, fail to express our gratitude, our serenity when we hear such nice comments, they refresh our quill, they refuel our will to give the best we could.
Thanks dear friend for your final touch without which our efforts would be vain...
Hamid best regards.
Thanks dear friend for your final touch without which our efforts would be vain...
Hamid best regards.
14th Oct 2024 5:19pm
14th Oct 2024 5:23pm
Hi, Sam !
my pleasure my friend,
i used to paint from nature my best ones, and this one is written
on the field with truthful emotions, which reflects my state of mind
then..
Happiness and success for ever my friend.. Hamid.
my pleasure my friend,
i used to paint from nature my best ones, and this one is written
on the field with truthful emotions, which reflects my state of mind
then..
Happiness and success for ever my friend.. Hamid.
