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Taken

I pushed her back, took control,
A hunger burned within my soul.
Her eyes, wide with sheer desire,
Lit the room like a growing fire.

As I took her, slow and deep,
I savored every sigh she'd keep.
Each moan, each shudder, fueled my need,
A dance where I would take the lead.

She neared her peak, I felt it rise,
But stopped to see it in her eyes.
I teased, I lingered, made it last,
Prolonging pleasure, holding fast.

For in that moment, time stood still,
A game of passion, matched in skill.
I drew it out, the night our own,
In every touch, a thrill was sown.
Written by Panter896
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this is one of my personal favorites that will be featured in naughty lil book of poetry - looking forward to the feedback.
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