deepundergroundpoetry.com
Oi, Oil, Oi!
The hoisted loins are poisoned poise.
Enjoying toil destroys and cloys.
Recoiling droids conjoin to foil.
Some 'roids had boys exploiting points.
Our Doyley Freud was voyeur coin.
Flamboyance roils this voyage ploy.
A royal Noid embroidered groin.
Deployment boils such loitered soil.
Appointing Troy is Soylent soy.
Ahoy annoyed when pointing oinks.
Shall toying spoil avoidance coy.
Employing noise devoid of choice.
Anointing oil needs joyful voice.
Rejoining Deutch with corduroy.
Enjoying toil destroys and cloys.
Recoiling droids conjoin to foil.
Some 'roids had boys exploiting points.
Our Doyley Freud was voyeur coin.
Flamboyance roils this voyage ploy.
A royal Noid embroidered groin.
Deployment boils such loitered soil.
Appointing Troy is Soylent soy.
Ahoy annoyed when pointing oinks.
Shall toying spoil avoidance coy.
Employing noise devoid of choice.
Anointing oil needs joyful voice.
Rejoining Deutch with corduroy.
Published 10th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Just a challenge to take the given syllable schematics in direction and transition to potentially create a writing. I found this one to be really challenging, as it really tried my vocabulary. I guess it's sort of about the corruption and sexual immorality of the world, as well as on a global scale, conflict.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 2
reading list entries 0
comments 2
reads 71
Commenting Preference:
The author is looking for friendly feedback.
10th Oct 2024 12:22pm
I liked the continual rhyme scheme of oi.
Found that to be very impressive you crafted that into
verse.
Found that to be very impressive you crafted that into
verse.
10th Oct 2024 11:57pm
Yeah, it was challenging. I started to run out of words, so I only wrote 7 stanzas, instead of the 8 I normally try for. Thanks for checking it out and giving your commentary. Your support is always appreciated.
