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Breathing Room
most of the women I've dated
never wore panties...unless they had to
and I've always seconded that motion
cuz um a...heh heh...firm advocate for Women's rights
...and filthy late nights drives..
as i flashback to my fingers
being gripped tight while fingerfucking
my Lady Luck along the Southern State parkway
doin a smooth 95 mph....her foot up on the dashboard
her sundress flowing under the moonlight
her head cocked back...soaking it all in
a dark sky freckled with hints of familiar stars
the wind exfoliating her pussy
the revving engine throbbing beneath her ass
and my fingers punctuating her moods
galvanizing her appreciation for me
cuz i took the time to understand the simplicity
that throbbed beneath her complexities
baby girl just needed some breathing room
never wore panties...unless they had to
and I've always seconded that motion
cuz um a...heh heh...firm advocate for Women's rights
...and filthy late nights drives..
as i flashback to my fingers
being gripped tight while fingerfucking
my Lady Luck along the Southern State parkway
doin a smooth 95 mph....her foot up on the dashboard
her sundress flowing under the moonlight
her head cocked back...soaking it all in
a dark sky freckled with hints of familiar stars
the wind exfoliating her pussy
the revving engine throbbing beneath her ass
and my fingers punctuating her moods
galvanizing her appreciation for me
cuz i took the time to understand the simplicity
that throbbed beneath her complexities
baby girl just needed some breathing room
Published 8th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Memories...
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8th Oct 2024 7:50pm
Hahaha, that last line so explains the title, freaking great erotica here dude
8th Oct 2024 8:51pm
8th Oct 2024 9:29pm
Very cool wild ride down memory lane.
A dark sky freckled with hints of familiar stars - love that.
A dark sky freckled with hints of familiar stars - love that.
8th Oct 2024 10:14pm
Why do you do this to me? I open up your post and have to immediately take a shower.
Please, keep doing this…
I love showers ;)
This is exquisite, my friend.
Please, keep doing this…
I love showers ;)
This is exquisite, my friend.
9th Oct 2024 1:25am
9th Oct 2024 4:21am
This is so turn on.. my office colleague is working rite now and I don't want to please her. Though she doesn't wear panty 😉
9th Oct 2024 2:48pm
Those are memories to cherish :-)
...late night drives & memory lanes...
Brought me back to a date when I wore panties and they ended up in a guy's pocket. "You understand they're mine now, right?" Great piece, Naajir.
...late night drives & memory lanes...
Brought me back to a date when I wore panties and they ended up in a guy's pocket. "You understand they're mine now, right?" Great piece, Naajir.
10th Oct 2024 10:52pm
Ha ha.. I logged on, read this and immediately started smiling! With every line, I visualized the scene....slowly!
Good lord!!
Still smiling....
Good lord!!
Still smiling....
12th Oct 2024 4:07am
12th Oct 2024 4:29am
