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Unable To Open My Eyes
Behind closed doors lurks a different monster
Not the one that’s portrayed on every livestream
Playing off this charade that’s been getting over
Moving forward with the logistics of the scheme
Heartless in the belief of satisfying his shallow ego
We’re all human pawns on a maniacal chessboard
Plotting how to conquer and slay every single rival
Every attempt at peace will be maliciously ignored
Loyalty is rewarded while the insubordinate suffer
Transparent souls are met with an untimely demise
Brutal stench of death abominates a careless wind
Praying it's all a dream but unable to open my eyes
Not the one that’s portrayed on every livestream
Playing off this charade that’s been getting over
Moving forward with the logistics of the scheme
Heartless in the belief of satisfying his shallow ego
We’re all human pawns on a maniacal chessboard
Plotting how to conquer and slay every single rival
Every attempt at peace will be maliciously ignored
Loyalty is rewarded while the insubordinate suffer
Transparent souls are met with an untimely demise
Brutal stench of death abominates a careless wind
Praying it's all a dream but unable to open my eyes
Published 8th Oct 2024
Author's Note
Late night musing. Ever notice if you dive down rabbit-holes frequently enough, that somehow they will eventually invade your subconscious dreams. Appreciate you.
- Damian DeadLove
" I'm the one you never see, in the dead of night
Peeking in your window, staying out of sight
Go to bed, lock the door, don't look in the mirror
What if I was right behind you,
Smiling like a killer"
-Lemmy Kilmister
- Damian DeadLove
" I'm the one you never see, in the dead of night
Peeking in your window, staying out of sight
Go to bed, lock the door, don't look in the mirror
What if I was right behind you,
Smiling like a killer"
-Lemmy Kilmister
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8th Oct 2024 7:49am
It's a wowza Damian, looks like you're getting into the Halloween theme too haha 🙃❤️
9th Oct 2024 4:08am
8th Oct 2024 9:53am
9th Oct 2024 4:09am
Thanks for reading, Dreamz. Really means a lot to me. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 10:43am
This is good, real good. Nicely written my friend. That image is Killer!
9th Oct 2024 4:12am
Thanks, Keith. I'm glad you liked it. When I seen that image I knew it was the one. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 10:49am
9th Oct 2024 4:13am
8th Oct 2024 12:40pm
Your honesty in this piece is truly inspiring. I think we all have learned to show our best sides and hide our darkness. Yet poets need darkness to be able to write. I've written and posted some deeply personal pieces when I found my "fuck it, this is me" vibe. Having said that: I don't think anyone know or sees what's beneath the ink we share.
Love this one, Damian, it's beautiful in its honesty - also: the image pairs perfectly.
Love this one, Damian, it's beautiful in its honesty - also: the image pairs perfectly.
Couldn't agree with you more, Duende. I always enjoy your commentary. Thanks for reading. Honored as always to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 12:41pm
Nicely Done 👍 that thought of the rabbit hole 🕳️ in the sense of trying desperately to escape, from the darkness that lures below the deepness of the rabbit hole 🕳️🐺 WOLF BAY 🐺🪬
9th Oct 2024 4:17am
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8th Oct 2024 1:02pm
Well, this poem does show how loyalty can make you blin to what is really going on and that if we can only step back, we can see the whole picture.
9th Oct 2024 4:19am
Couldn't agree with you more, Fia. Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 2:52pm
9th Oct 2024 4:21am
Thanks so much for the kind words. Thanks for reading. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 6:46pm
'' Late night musing.
Ever notice if you dive down rabbit-holes frequently enough,
that somehow they will eventually invade
your subconscious dreams. ''
I've experienced this in the early 2000's
Had to kinda fall back cuz I was alienating too may loved ones.
Yeahhh man.. them dreams get heavy
Big thx for the reminder.
Ever notice if you dive down rabbit-holes frequently enough,
that somehow they will eventually invade
your subconscious dreams. ''
I've experienced this in the early 2000's
Had to kinda fall back cuz I was alienating too may loved ones.
Yeahhh man.. them dreams get heavy
Big thx for the reminder.
9th Oct 2024 4:30am
I hear you, they do get heavy, Naaj. It's easy to alienate others, when you're swimming in blood infested waters. Thanks for reading. Honored to make your RL. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 9:07pm
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9th Oct 2024 4:33am
Thanks so much for reading and your commentary, Dragon. Appreciate you.
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