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Death of the Leaves
As my thoughts transform into dreams in a vast sky.
The barren trees lack our need to question why.
Although one tree bled scarlet berries,
invisible wounds very, from the severed leaves.
But the earth had seasons to achieve.
Leaves consumed in color naively fall,
joyous to be free.
They know not of decay, and that beneath a snow drift
they will stay.
In a starless abyss, an onyx void
Until buds of spring burst with joy.
The trees need not grieve.
For they have already forgotten
the death of the leaves.
The barren trees lack our need to question why.
Although one tree bled scarlet berries,
invisible wounds very, from the severed leaves.
But the earth had seasons to achieve.
Leaves consumed in color naively fall,
joyous to be free.
They know not of decay, and that beneath a snow drift
they will stay.
In a starless abyss, an onyx void
Until buds of spring burst with joy.
The trees need not grieve.
For they have already forgotten
the death of the leaves.
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Re. Death of the Leaves
8th Oct 2024 2:50am
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8th Oct 2024 2:52am
Re. Death of the Leaves
8th Oct 2024 2:57am
Brilliantly written, Debbie. Always dig the excellent imagery in your writes. Appreciate you.
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8th Oct 2024 3:07am
You are too kind! Thank you very much.
I enjoy when I can make people see what I see in my mind.
Have a great night 🌙
I enjoy when I can make people see what I see in my mind.
Have a great night 🌙
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8th Oct 2024 3:22am
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8th Oct 2024 10:43am
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8th Oct 2024 11:51am
There is something melancholy about the falling leaves. Thx for checking out!!
Re. Death of the Leaves
8th Oct 2024 10:47am
Love the delivery on this poem. What a flow and how you capture such great atmosphere. Wonderful!!!
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8th Oct 2024 11:55am
Re. Death of the Leaves
8th Oct 2024 12:26pm
What an amazing piece. Your observations are always spot on.
"The trees need not grieve" > this gives me a new perspective on loss and grieve.
Thank you for sharing such a gem 🍂
"The trees need not grieve" > this gives me a new perspective on loss and grieve.
Thank you for sharing such a gem 🍂
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8th Oct 2024 12:38pm
Thank you for such nice comments. I guess I am very observant in nature, lol.
To create a new perspective for you, makes it so worth writing.
Happy you liked it!
To create a new perspective for you, makes it so worth writing.
Happy you liked it!
Re. Death of the Leaves
16th Oct 2024 10:51pm
Your expression of life's cycle is beautiful. Leaves falling feed roots & thus does the cycle spin anew. Love the way you speak of nature
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17th Oct 2024 2:07am
Thank you, that is so very nice. I love nature. I like to personify it too.
Thx for checking out!
Thx for checking out!