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Redefine
Deep inside, don't understand
Eyes shut wide, ears expand
Signals sail upon cloud nine
Hear the bangs, echoes mime
Area grey, what's that tune?
Hysteria sways, I'll be back soon
Touch the sky, life rewinds
Dreamland spies... redefine
Eyes shut wide, ears expand
Signals sail upon cloud nine
Hear the bangs, echoes mime
Area grey, what's that tune?
Hysteria sways, I'll be back soon
Touch the sky, life rewinds
Dreamland spies... redefine
Published 2nd Oct 2024
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2nd Oct 2024 12:47pm
Aww struggle with sleep because your mind cannot quiet down. Love this Pete
2nd Oct 2024 1:13pm
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2nd Oct 2024 2:03pm
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2024 2:51pm
Nice write... resonates with me 😊
2nd Oct 2024 6:06pm
Anonymous
- Edited 6th Nov 2024 8:45pm
2nd Oct 2024 3:46pm
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2nd Oct 2024 6:07pm
Anonymous
2nd Oct 2024 7:56pm
Pete the rhymer. Another great poem. :)
2nd Oct 2024 8:21pm
3rd Oct 2024 2:35am
I'm beginning to think every writer has an Insomnia problem. lol. Well at least I'm not the only one. Great write, Pete. Appreciate you.
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3rd Oct 2024 12:26pm
