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My Heart (the song version)
https://suno.com/song/4759b5a3-a3c7-45f4-af94-6452f2c0d384
Who said that I can't have it all
When the sun is shining & you're in my heart
Where else would I wanna be
Just sitting here watching you looking at me
And when this all comes to an end
I know I will enjoy every second we spend
And if you ever have a doubt
Just reach for me and you'll find out
You are my heart that is beating
you're the stars that are gleaming
you are the dream I keep seeing
you are everything that I needed
and if you ever wonder why I look at you smile
It's because its you.
©Copywrite Fianaturie8
Who said that I can't have it all
When the sun is shining & you're in my heart
Where else would I wanna be
Just sitting here watching you looking at me
And when this all comes to an end
I know I will enjoy every second we spend
And if you ever have a doubt
Just reach for me and you'll find out
You are my heart that is beating
you're the stars that are gleaming
you are the dream I keep seeing
you are everything that I needed
and if you ever wonder why I look at you smile
It's because its you.
©Copywrite Fianaturie8
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 30th Sep 2024
| Edited 23rd Oct 2024
Author's Note
Tried the Suno site for my country song. I chose a male generated voice it seemed to suit the song. Not me singing.
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Re. My Heart (the song version)
30th Sep 2024 11:15pm
An interesting avenue to take poetry submissions down. The poem lent itself well to being sung and if I didn’t know better I’d have sworn it was a “real” country song.
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Re: Re. My Heart (the song version)
30th Sep 2024 11:55pm
Thank you. I was not sure I was going to do it. But I will try something new. Appreciate the comment.
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1st Oct 2024 2:17am
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Re. My Heart (the song version)
1st Oct 2024 3:57am
I'm glad you were able to add a 2nd verse here to your original draft of about 2 wks ago. And not only that but also create a tune. Now sit back 'n' enjoy the royalties. 💸😉
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1st Oct 2024 10:12am
I'll need to listen to this once I have a stable internet connection, but I thought the lyrics were really good.
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Re. My Heart (the song version)
1st Oct 2024 12:46pm
Even though country is not a genre I usually listen to, it really really works with this piece.
...It's a beautiful song you wrote, I especially love the second stanza 💕
...It's a beautiful song you wrote, I especially love the second stanza 💕
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1st Oct 2024 2:36pm