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The Abominate
He stalks along the fringes of the Sub-conscious
Walking in comfort along the Bed of Coals
that is your Soul
Waiting for your eyes to close....
To depose you of your Sovereignty
Hate-seeking in the darkness
Looking to harness the despicable you
Ride your E-motions like a Pale White Horse
Stray you off course...cavity-strip you of common remorse
Dump you in Limbo's Lost and Found
While He drags your Avatar along that long Green Mile
Leave you used up with a broken smile
As a new addition to His pile of mangled castaways
Taking explicit pride in His erected tombstone
Of the flayed Human Condition
Walking in comfort along the Bed of Coals
that is your Soul
Waiting for your eyes to close....
To depose you of your Sovereignty
Hate-seeking in the darkness
Looking to harness the despicable you
Ride your E-motions like a Pale White Horse
Stray you off course...cavity-strip you of common remorse
Dump you in Limbo's Lost and Found
While He drags your Avatar along that long Green Mile
Leave you used up with a broken smile
As a new addition to His pile of mangled castaways
Taking explicit pride in His erected tombstone
Of the flayed Human Condition
Published 30th Sep 2024
| Edited 1st Oct 2024
Author's Note
Inspired by pic...and some otherness
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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30th Sep 2024 9:29pm
30th Sep 2024 10:49pm
1st Oct 2024 12:28pm
What an amazing piece, Naajir.
So much clever lines in this one: Limbo's Lost and Found for example.
...I sometimes wonder how that mind of yours works (and I mean this in a good way)
So much clever lines in this one: Limbo's Lost and Found for example.
...I sometimes wonder how that mind of yours works (and I mean this in a good way)
2nd Oct 2024 1:46am
Wow... I want some of that otherness you're having!
That was a wild ride.
❤k
That was a wild ride.
❤k
4th Oct 2024 2:53am
