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Your Demise

It takes seconds of my life to kill you forever.
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. Your Demise
(Debbie)
27th Sep 2024 11:20pm
But it's a life sentence of you are caught, so don't get caught.
You can make even one line interesting.
deliabear
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Re: Re. Your Demise
27th Sep 2024 11:35pm
Thanks Debbie. I appreciate your comments.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Your Demise
(Damian DeadLove)
28th Sep 2024 2:27am
Profound write, Vision. Dig this. Appreciate you.

DL
DamianDeadLove
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Re: Re. Your Demise
28th Sep 2024 10:24am
Thank you Damian.
Vision_of_insanity
Re. Your Demise
29th Sep 2024 1:06pm
Don't worry, it takes no time for me to distract you. I'll just bend over :)
AfterSexDilemma
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Re: Re. Your Demise
29th Sep 2024 1:13pm
and do what, tie your shoe?
Vision_of_insanity
Re: Re. Your Demise
29th Sep 2024 1:30pm
No. I was gonna show you my hang nails.
AfterSexDilemma
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Re: Re. Your Demise
29th Sep 2024 2:09pm
Gross!
Vision_of_insanity
Re: Re. Your Demise
29th Sep 2024 2:34pm
Hahaha I win. Totally distracted
AfterSexDilemma
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