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their heaven...only under her pleated skirt
the very first time
when i went to our
ancestral farm with a relative,
N i saw an old n ruined
but beautiful farm house
it had broken doors,
wrapped in layers of old memories...
a desolate courtyard
and an old walnut tree
standing in it,
beneath which
a flock of squirrels were playing ...
i started imagining
if i had ever come here?
in my childhood,,,
n meanwhile the chirping
of birds started making
noise in my ears...
but it was very soothing..
the wind was blowing
at its speed, n was thrilling me,
as if my ancestors
were forcing me to have sex here
well we entered the door
by opening the rusty latch
the smell of wood burnt years ago
filled my lungs,
n was representing lust, love
and the birth of a new generation,,,
n i wondered aaahh...
would they have waited
for the sun to set on the horizon?
would they ever have written
their sexual desires on some parchment?
would they ever have made
each other frothy?
would they ever had shower sex???
or enjoyed orgasm
in the grass by the river...
or he might have ejaculated
awww on the sacks of figs....
i wondered if those
two people would be lying here
on the rough mat!!
they would have lay
with the embers
tangled together by the fire,
and he would have breathed hot
and heavy in her ears,
and whether
she would have wrapped
her thighs around his waist
and felt the same love
as i have felt...
when i went to our
ancestral farm with a relative,
N i saw an old n ruined
but beautiful farm house
it had broken doors,
wrapped in layers of old memories...
a desolate courtyard
and an old walnut tree
standing in it,
beneath which
a flock of squirrels were playing ...
i started imagining
if i had ever come here?
in my childhood,,,
n meanwhile the chirping
of birds started making
noise in my ears...
but it was very soothing..
the wind was blowing
at its speed, n was thrilling me,
as if my ancestors
were forcing me to have sex here
well we entered the door
by opening the rusty latch
the smell of wood burnt years ago
filled my lungs,
n was representing lust, love
and the birth of a new generation,,,
n i wondered aaahh...
would they have waited
for the sun to set on the horizon?
would they ever have written
their sexual desires on some parchment?
would they ever have made
each other frothy?
would they ever had shower sex???
or enjoyed orgasm
in the grass by the river...
or he might have ejaculated
awww on the sacks of figs....
i wondered if those
two people would be lying here
on the rough mat!!
they would have lay
with the embers
tangled together by the fire,
and he would have breathed hot
and heavy in her ears,
and whether
she would have wrapped
her thighs around his waist
and felt the same love
as i have felt...
Published 23rd Sep 2024
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23rd Sep 2024 7:00am
23rd Sep 2024 7:26am
Hey MS
thanks so much for reading... well when I wrote i really didn't realize that there could be a movie scene like this...but ya it's possible...
thanks so much for reading... well when I wrote i really didn't realize that there could be a movie scene like this...but ya it's possible...
23rd Sep 2024 12:53pm
Well it's so thoughtful. Beautifull periodic thought.
Just imagine over the decades , the generations will have the same thoughts for OYO rooms. 😀
Just imagine over the decades , the generations will have the same thoughts for OYO rooms. 😀
23rd Sep 2024 2:44pm
yes OYO rooms,..will always be decorated with new interiors.. for new generation...
23rd Sep 2024 6:06pm
Old houses, especially those where older furniture and features are still preserved, can make the modern beholder wonder how its earlier occupants made love....they may not have had showers, but what about wooden bathtubs filled by a pump or well water? Would they have dared make love in daytime would be another question to ponder. In the case of farms, might they have experimented in hay lofts and outdoor haystacks? Certainly in England night clothes didn't become usual until the 1500s, most people went to bed stark naked before then, which must have tempted a lot of sex among those active enough to pursue it!
23rd Sep 2024 6:18pm
i am curious to know about the ancient times and this curiosity has been expressed in this poem. And as far as about england, India is still conservative in some areas, I cannot tell anything about the 1500s...
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