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Autumn Leaves
Such dynamic tap dancers
displaying their skills,
on rooftops and streets
and decks and hills.
On sun-filtered sidewalks
past burning bush flowers
tempestuous winds
dance with them, for hours.
displaying their skills,
on rooftops and streets
and decks and hills.
On sun-filtered sidewalks
past burning bush flowers
tempestuous winds
dance with them, for hours.
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22nd Sep 2024 9:48pm
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22nd Sep 2024 10:04pm
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22nd Sep 2024 10:49pm
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23rd Sep 2024 00:23am
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Re. Autumn Leaves
23rd Sep 2024 2:35am
Dear T,
I enjoyed your rendering of this coming season. Luscious colors and cooler weather are a perfect combo. Makes me look forward to autumn even more. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed your rendering of this coming season. Luscious colors and cooler weather are a perfect combo. Makes me look forward to autumn even more. Lovely write. H🌷
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24th Sep 2024 2:00am
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24th Sep 2024 2:33am
It matches the pic perfectly especially
the sun filtered sidewalk stanza.
We are officially in Autumn!
the sun filtered sidewalk stanza.
We are officially in Autumn!
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24th Sep 2024 8:20pm
Yes we are. It'll be nice to be able to walk somewhere without sweating. :) Thank you, Del.
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24th Sep 2024 11:12am