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Autumn Leaves
Those dry, withered dancers
can flourish their skills
on streets and rooftops
and sun-shaded hills.
On sun-filtered sidewalks
past burning bush flowers,
tempestuous winds
dance with them for hours.
Published 22nd Sep 2024
| Edited 9th Nov 2024
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23rd Sep 2024 2:35am
Dear T,
I enjoyed your rendering of this coming season. Luscious colors and cooler weather are a perfect combo. Makes me look forward to autumn even more. Lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed your rendering of this coming season. Luscious colors and cooler weather are a perfect combo. Makes me look forward to autumn even more. Lovely write. H🌷
24th Sep 2024 2:00am
24th Sep 2024 2:33am
It matches the pic perfectly especially
the sun filtered sidewalk stanza.
We are officially in Autumn!
the sun filtered sidewalk stanza.
We are officially in Autumn!
24th Sep 2024 8:20pm
Yes we are. It'll be nice to be able to walk somewhere without sweating. :) Thank you, Del.
24th Sep 2024 11:12am
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