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Torrents of Insanity
Restless, unsettled preoccupation
manic, unstable ideation
pervasive thoughts for protection
maladapted process of intellection
Ill equipped to manage bracing
obsessive thinking, frantic pacing
no relief, comfort chasing
cannot cease the endless racing
Darkness envelopes, neurosis and anxiety
trembling, unsteady, unable to see
afflicted and condemned by society
mind fractured in torrents of insanity
manic, unstable ideation
pervasive thoughts for protection
maladapted process of intellection
Ill equipped to manage bracing
obsessive thinking, frantic pacing
no relief, comfort chasing
cannot cease the endless racing
Darkness envelopes, neurosis and anxiety
trembling, unsteady, unable to see
afflicted and condemned by society
mind fractured in torrents of insanity
Published 22nd Sep 2024
| Edited 8th Oct 2024
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22nd Sep 2024 1:03pm
Mel,
Long time no speak. I wanted to tell you how amazing this poem is. You described in such great details these horrors many may go through. Wonderfully worded with a smooth flow
Long time no speak. I wanted to tell you how amazing this poem is. You described in such great details these horrors many may go through. Wonderfully worded with a smooth flow
22nd Sep 2024 1:43pm
Thank you dear friend. It has been awhile. My creativity ebbs and flows according to my mental state. Ha!
Bless,
Mel
Bless,
Mel
22nd Sep 2024 1:45pm
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22nd Sep 2024 3:30pm
22nd Sep 2024 3:25pm
Nice to see you back, Mel. In addition to your poetic skill, this is a very worthy offering for the comp! Best of luck!
22nd Sep 2024 3:31pm
23rd Sep 2024 1:52am
8th Oct 2024 8:41am
It is true. Most times I manage...sometimes I do not. Thanks for the read:)
Bless,
Mel
Bless,
Mel
8th Oct 2024 2:27am
We’re all maddened by our minds when we are idle in the dark… sometimes creativity longs for the night. Thank you for sharing these poetic offerings.
8th Oct 2024 8:43am
I do find I write more when in the the deep darkness. Thanks for your feedback.
Bless,
Mel
Bless,
Mel
