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CloSet Freak..
Smother me
In your recovery..
From MadNess..
Your illness rings..
So softly..
A Humming of angels..
A Cold coasting
closet freak..
Virtuous..
Sensually injected..
Perversely
effective..
Sweet
sinister
cyanide..
Borderline
Animalistic..
For its you
that feeds my sickness..
Bound by your crown.
In
the
liquid
I
drown..
In your recovery..
From MadNess..
Your illness rings..
So softly..
A Humming of angels..
A Cold coasting
closet freak..
Virtuous..
Sensually injected..
Perversely
effective..
Sweet
sinister
cyanide..
Borderline
Animalistic..
For its you
that feeds my sickness..
Bound by your crown.
In
the
liquid
I
drown..
Published 16th May 2012
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Anonymous
16th May 2012 2:15am
Minimalist and effective
A good read
Peace
Kitty
A good read
Peace
Kitty
16th May 2012 8:06am
16th May 2012 2:22am
I love this..This is why you will always be the Mistress of Darkness to me..
Sweet
sinister
cyanide..
Borderline
Animalistic..
For its you
that feeds my sickness.. end quote
dark and lovely..peace Crim
Sweet
sinister
cyanide..
Borderline
Animalistic..
For its you
that feeds my sickness.. end quote
dark and lovely..peace Crim
16th May 2012 8:07am
16th May 2012 2:35am
16th May 2012 8:07am
Awe. thank you miss Firebyrd I do appreciate you .. I shall return the gesture and definitely go read you ..
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16th May 2012 4:56am
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16th May 2012 8:08am
16th May 2012 5:07am
My dear Mistress Devilish.....I love everything that you have written and will ever write...I am thankful that I reach out to you and jadie when i need help the most to find myself....to find my dark corner where everything is so sinister....I love you and jadie both and this is a most excellent read :)
16th May 2012 1:55pm
your verses are great.
You were already well into your early poems. Are only improving with the passage of time. Like good wine, blood red, of course.
I've shared on twitter. I hope you do not mind.
You were already well into your early poems. Are only improving with the passage of time. Like good wine, blood red, of course.
I've shared on twitter. I hope you do not mind.
16th May 2012 3:37pm
16th May 2012 8:44pm
17th May 2012 1:01am
You're amazing. I just wanted to say so. The string of words that flow from your fingertips, always causes me to hold my breath until the end.
17th May 2012 1:31am
18th May 2012 4:56am
2nd Jun 2012 6:56pm
thats going in my reading list.. the 1st actually. Loved it. The poignant choice of words and format.. simple yet very effective. Great write
3rd Jun 2012 6:02pm
thank you so much you.. I appreciate that.. how is your stay cuming along.. eva need anything holla at me.. i might not have the answers but well have fun tryin to figure it out.
6th Jun 2012 10:31pm
So masterfully crafted, you have so much talent, can't wait to see where you let it take you.
Always love you - XXOO
Always love you - XXOO
