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Dreams
I’ve never been a believer in dreams
I never thought of anything
Other than what it seems
I have built a life made of stones
Stacked each and every one
All on my own
It all started tumbling down
Washed by gushing tears
Choking me as I drown
I have always thought my life
Was nothing but a waste of time
A place full of misery and strife
Right until we finally met
Dreams started to make sense
Every minute I began to regret
How can eyes be so blind
I did not see in front of me
Nor what was behind
All I want now is a world to build
From stones I hid behind
And dreams I want fulfilled
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Re. Dreams
19th Sep 2024 6:51am
Dear S,
I enjoyed the development in this poem from hopeless to hopeful and excited about a present and future. Very lovely write. H🌷
I enjoyed the development in this poem from hopeless to hopeful and excited about a present and future. Very lovely write. H🌷
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Re: Re. Dreams
22nd Sep 2024 4:52am
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Re: Re. Dreams
22nd Sep 2024 4:55am
Just so you know I don’t always do sad… well maybe most of the time… however sometimes a star comes my way and shines everything…. Keep shining Shiloh
Re. Dreams
19th Sep 2024 9:54am
What an excellent last stanza to an amazing piece.
I love the hopefulness of this one...
...I'm a dreamer and a rationalist, so basically I'm screwed...
I love the hopefulness of this one...
...I'm a dreamer and a rationalist, so basically I'm screwed...
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Re: Re. Dreams
22nd Sep 2024 4:56am
Screwed?…. Mmmm.. ok I’m not going to say anything…. This is just between you and me.
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22nd Sep 2024 4:57am
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19th Sep 2024 5:43pm
What did you use to secure that brick? I think you need consult what they used on the pyramids. Those things are century solid. lol
This is a very good poem my friend. Love it Fia xoxo
This is a very good poem my friend. Love it Fia xoxo
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22nd Sep 2024 4:59am
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