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The Other Me
I see her in the mirror,
Her smile a shade too wide,
Eyes that echo mine, yet hollow,
With secrets tucked inside.
She moves in time, but lingers,
Her step just out of sync,
as if she's waiting for a sign
To sever our fragile link.
Her fingers twitch, just slightly wrong,
Not quite mine but close,
A shiver runs down through my spine,
as her reflection grows.
She mouths the words I never spoke,
A silent threat, a plea,
That when the moon climbs high tonight,
She’ll trade her place with me.
And when I slip beneath the sheets,
Her shadow will uncoil,
She’ll wear my skin, my breath, my name—
While I fade into the void.
Her smile a shade too wide,
Eyes that echo mine, yet hollow,
With secrets tucked inside.
She moves in time, but lingers,
Her step just out of sync,
as if she's waiting for a sign
To sever our fragile link.
Her fingers twitch, just slightly wrong,
Not quite mine but close,
A shiver runs down through my spine,
as her reflection grows.
She mouths the words I never spoke,
A silent threat, a plea,
That when the moon climbs high tonight,
She’ll trade her place with me.
And when I slip beneath the sheets,
Her shadow will uncoil,
She’ll wear my skin, my breath, my name—
While I fade into the void.
Written by
Shilohverse
(Shiloh Mello)
Published Today
Author's Note
For The Case Of Mistaken Identity competition.
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I think we all have a little split personalities... anyways nice little entry Shiloh ❤️
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Here's a quote for you, "When she was good, she was very good indeed, but when she was bad she was horrid"
Maybe I'm her??
Maybe I'm her??
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Dear S,
I enjoyed the chilling creepy in this write. That enigmatic sinister other self. Almost like a Stepford wife. Eeeeekkkk. I wish you all the best for this comp. Terrific write. H🌷
I enjoyed the chilling creepy in this write. That enigmatic sinister other self. Almost like a Stepford wife. Eeeeekkkk. I wish you all the best for this comp. Terrific write. H🌷
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