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Senryu - Ponder 11
A poser perhaps
striving to be the real deal
long journey to self
striving to be the real deal
long journey to self
Published 14th Sep 2024
Author's Note
Tritely put, I'm fake'n it to make it.
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14th Sep 2024 3:39pm
15th Sep 2024 8:52am
Thank you so much, AP! Senryu/Haiku is one of my favorite poetry formats as well. For some reason I feel a deep reverance for generating passionate ideas and feelings with just 17 well chosen and arranged syllables. I am glad you enjoy the piece🙏
15th Sep 2024 4:04am
Dear GW,
I know the feeling. I liked the idea of evolving into something good when maybe we don’t necessarily start out feeling that way. Fab reflection, lovely write. H🌷
I know the feeling. I liked the idea of evolving into something good when maybe we don’t necessarily start out feeling that way. Fab reflection, lovely write. H🌷
15th Sep 2024 8:58am
Dear, Honoria
Thank you so much for your constant support of my poetry. I am so happy that our relationship has evolved into such a comforting ffriendship. Your every comment is music to my senses. I am thrilled that this piece resonates with you❣
Thank you so much for your constant support of my poetry. I am so happy that our relationship has evolved into such a comforting ffriendship. Your every comment is music to my senses. I am thrilled that this piece resonates with you❣
16th Sep 2024 3:27am
