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Cosmic Love
Jupiter skies
Lost in space
Soaring high
Venus waits
Connected souls
The atmos drips
This black hole
Eyes eclipse
Promised worlds
We'd never part
Love emerged
Amongst the stars
Lost in space
Soaring high
Venus waits
Connected souls
The atmos drips
This black hole
Eyes eclipse
Promised worlds
We'd never part
Love emerged
Amongst the stars
Published 13th Sep 2024
| Edited 23rd Sep 2024
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13th Sep 2024 9:45am
13th Sep 2024 10:08am
13th Sep 2024 10:56am
Love the wording in this one, especially "eyes eclipse"
Great flow too - a belated welcome to deep underground :-)
Great flow too - a belated welcome to deep underground :-)
13th Sep 2024 10:59am
13th Sep 2024 11:06am
13th Sep 2024 11:09am
15th Sep 2024 4:15am
Phenomenal write, Pete. It's very zen like, in my opinion. Nicely done. Appreciate you.
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