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Free...
When I saw you walk in this room
I felt my life push play and begin to resume
But it wasnt right, not even for a bit
And at first I thought it was because we no longer fit
But then I began to realize, that that isnt it
No, its much worse, and I hate having to admit
That it is only because
Your love for me isnt what it was
So I built a brick wall
But it began to fall
It was made between you and I
But now its floating towards the sky
You did this
Made my plan go amiss
You kind of deserve to die
With a knife stuck in the eye
But through this all
After this never forgiving fall
I still love you
And probably will no matter what you do
But the sad thing is
Once that you're his
I thought it would bother me
But no, I just need to be set free...
I felt my life push play and begin to resume
But it wasnt right, not even for a bit
And at first I thought it was because we no longer fit
But then I began to realize, that that isnt it
No, its much worse, and I hate having to admit
That it is only because
Your love for me isnt what it was
So I built a brick wall
But it began to fall
It was made between you and I
But now its floating towards the sky
You did this
Made my plan go amiss
You kind of deserve to die
With a knife stuck in the eye
But through this all
After this never forgiving fall
I still love you
And probably will no matter what you do
But the sad thing is
Once that you're his
I thought it would bother me
But no, I just need to be set free...
Published 15th May 2012
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15th May 2012 2:41am
I think that free is an appropriate name for this work of art. I can relate. I really do enjoy this poem.
I loved every word.
I loved every word.
15th May 2012 2:43am
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15th May 2012 2:52am
Lol...and to think, I thought this was going to be suckyish considering I cannot think straight O.o haha
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