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Back and Forth
Back and Forth
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
The shadow
moves
as fast
as any fire.
Does the flame
chase the shade
or does the darkness
chase the day?
Is it neither one
or both,
the same....
it's either way.
Published 6th Sep 2024
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6th Sep 2024 1:29pm
I read and reread this a few times... got different insight each time... well done...
6th Sep 2024 3:50pm
6th Sep 2024 3:53pm
Light vs. darkness... good vs. evil... made me think yin-yang... but in a wider... deeper... sensual way... the language is distilled... so interpretation is not driven by the use of adjectives... adverbs... other sorts of qualifiers... allows me to consider/reconsider the lines...
6th Sep 2024 4:13pm
Thank you....that was helpful.
It is minimalist, universal, metaphoric...
A = A'
You're on it.
Switch.
It is minimalist, universal, metaphoric...
A = A'
You're on it.
Switch.
