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No Puking Please
When the carnival comes to town
Cotton candy, makeup for the clowns
Don’t eat before a ride
Puking, people should hide
Always drink plenty of water.
Cotton candy, makeup for the clowns
Don’t eat before a ride
Puking, people should hide
Always drink plenty of water.
Published 3rd Sep 2024
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3rd Sep 2024 11:49am
Once you start the heaving
all that food is leaving
When the carnival is in town.
Nice work. Fia xoxo
all that food is leaving
When the carnival is in town.
Nice work. Fia xoxo
3rd Sep 2024 11:54am
3rd Sep 2024 11:51am
3rd Sep 2024 11:55am
Me too. Fright Fest is starting soon at a Six Flags near you!!
Thanks for the comments
Thanks for the comments
3rd Sep 2024 12:23pm
3rd Sep 2024 12:42pm
3rd Sep 2024 2:49pm
Someone feeling like they are going to puke, please don't sit behind me
on a ride! Lol
Cool write.
on a ride! Lol
Cool write.
3rd Sep 2024 7:00pm
3rd Sep 2024 7:13pm
3rd Sep 2024 7:14pm
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- Edited 15th Feb 2025 10:45pm
3rd Sep 2024 11:33pm
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4th Sep 2024 00:00am
You're right. Most rides that spin into oblivion just make me sick. Any ride though that has speed or height, sign me up!
Thanks for reading & commenting.
Thanks for reading & commenting.
