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My Dreamy Graveyard
My dreamy world of writing
is a graveyard shrouded in fog.
Where each story has a grave,
each grave has a character.
These living, breathing corpses
with open eyes, raspy voices
and souls, gaze on through my eyes.
is a graveyard shrouded in fog.
Where each story has a grave,
each grave has a character.
These living, breathing corpses
with open eyes, raspy voices
and souls, gaze on through my eyes.
Published 2nd Sep 2024
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It seems your words come straight from the heart which make them release such an impact in the reader.Hope everything will be fine ahead. Hamid
13th Sep 2024 2:37pm
Thank you Hamid. With my mental illness I exhibit high emotions and writing is a form of therapy.
i See and sense when poetry comes from the heart of the poet,
its full of emotion, and the writer seems to be deeply absorbed in
his words and feelings, Hope everything will be okay, just be optimist.
I am be polar with some other disease, but its not gonna take me
down hopelessly, i write, i stroll in the forest and in the mountains
i read the papers..i am always active, no time to think of my illness,
its full of emotion, and the writer seems to be deeply absorbed in
his words and feelings, Hope everything will be okay, just be optimist.
I am be polar with some other disease, but its not gonna take me
down hopelessly, i write, i stroll in the forest and in the mountains
i read the papers..i am always active, no time to think of my illness,
17th Sep 2024 8:22pm
Living as who you have to be rather than who you'd rather be can be tiring.
No one will be a better you than you though.
No one will be a better you than you though.
