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Love has no restriction

White sand is running
The hourglass will betray
We'll forever love

Written by Vision_of_insanity

Published 30th Aug 2024

#aging #LifeCycle #love #senryu

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Re. Love has no restriction

30th Aug 2024 11:39am

Nice capturing with this...

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30th Aug 2024 11:44am

Appreciate the comments

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Re. Love has no restriction

30th Aug 2024 11:50am

This was really good .the hourglass will betray, I like that.

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30th Aug 2024 11:50am

It betrays us all. Thanks for the comments

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Re. Love has no restriction

30th Aug 2024 2:45pm

I have thought that true love is an eternal hourglass. Great thought stimulator. Hus and love, Oral

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30th Aug 2024 2:46pm

HA! That is true. I guess my hourglass or love isn't so true. Thanks for the comments

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