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A Tragic Moment

Once I have seen you
I wish I never saw you
You ended my life
Vision_of_insanity
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Re. A Tragic Moment
30th Aug 2024 11:29am
Make me think of Medusa...
LilDragonFly
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Re: Re. A Tragic Moment
30th Aug 2024 11:30am
Good point. Thanks for the comment
Vision_of_insanity
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(Debbie)
30th Aug 2024 11:43am
Looked fate in the eyes.
I liked this
deliabear
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Re: Re. A Tragic Moment
30th Aug 2024 11:44am
Thank you Debbie. Appreciated
Vision_of_insanity
Re. A Tragic Moment
30th Aug 2024 2:43pm
WOW! Three powerful lines. Hugs and love, Oral
TheOralizer
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Re: Re. A Tragic Moment
30th Aug 2024 2:45pm
Thanks Oral. Much appreciated!
Vision_of_insanity

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