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The Other Soul I Lost Mine in
I saw your name appeared
on the lock screen on my phone
it was saved a heart
the heart I gave away
I tried to hold myself back
but my hand reacted almost naturally
reaching out to the other soul
I lost mine in
the screen displayed my chat with you
oh god
I had never seen anyone so desperate before
10 messages I sent
excitedly telling you about my day
for me to receive an “oh” from you
my heart shattered to two
if only I still had a heart
but I gave mine away
to the other soul I lost mine in
on the lock screen on my phone
it was saved a heart
the heart I gave away
I tried to hold myself back
but my hand reacted almost naturally
reaching out to the other soul
I lost mine in
the screen displayed my chat with you
oh god
I had never seen anyone so desperate before
10 messages I sent
excitedly telling you about my day
for me to receive an “oh” from you
my heart shattered to two
if only I still had a heart
but I gave mine away
to the other soul I lost mine in
Published 30th Aug 2024
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30th Aug 2024 3:00am
this is beautifully written poem of heartbreak I know what it is to lose part of my soul this way I feel for your pain...
30th Aug 2024 8:28pm
It can be painful to look back and see what state we were in when we lost ourselves to someone unfazed…
Beautiful rendering of unrequited love.
Beautiful rendering of unrequited love.
