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casting stones at beatles

we were waiting for the yellow submarine  
it was coming to take us away
 
I was next in line listening to mister Jimmy
needing a prescription but never got what he wanted
 
then some fool on the hill in the dead of night
invited us all in thru his bathroom window
 
everyone seemed pleased to meet him
but hells bells, how many times should we guess his name?
Written by down2dirt
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Written for crazy 8’s competition
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