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When I'm Writing, Stay Away From Me
"You fucked her!"
"No I didn't!" (Oh shit!!)
"Yes you did you bastard, how could you?"
"You fucked her even if you didn't!!"
She looks over my shoulder as I write
I say: Are you mad about something?
I see the look on her face get really mean
She looks at me again and goes upstairs
This was going to be a funny thing, this conversation I was going to write
But now I lost the thread on what I was going to say
The timing was perfect though
Every time she walks by, she sneaks a look at what I'm writing and I stick my head in the way
She gets all mad and she says that she wasn't trying to look
Come on, just mind your own fucking business and you wouldn't get yourself all bent out of shape
This is my hobby, my interest, my alone time
Life is hard enough without all this torment
Oh well
What the fuck!??!
There goes another idea
It's hard to stay in a good mood in my own home when she's around sometimes
I do my best to stay positive
This will be the last time she comes over when I'm writing
I'm done!
"No I didn't!" (Oh shit!!)
"Yes you did you bastard, how could you?"
"You fucked her even if you didn't!!"
She looks over my shoulder as I write
I say: Are you mad about something?
I see the look on her face get really mean
She looks at me again and goes upstairs
This was going to be a funny thing, this conversation I was going to write
But now I lost the thread on what I was going to say
The timing was perfect though
Every time she walks by, she sneaks a look at what I'm writing and I stick my head in the way
She gets all mad and she says that she wasn't trying to look
Come on, just mind your own fucking business and you wouldn't get yourself all bent out of shape
This is my hobby, my interest, my alone time
Life is hard enough without all this torment
Oh well
What the fuck!??!
There goes another idea
It's hard to stay in a good mood in my own home when she's around sometimes
I do my best to stay positive
This will be the last time she comes over when I'm writing
I'm done!
Published 20th Aug 2024
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20th Aug 2024 2:34pm
I feel this. When this is your peace and joy, then someone disrupts it and you lose your train of thought. It is upsetting. Nice Keith;))
20th Aug 2024 2:39pm
Always! It's a terrible thing. Thanks for the review & understanding.
20th Aug 2024 2:40pm
20th Aug 2024 2:41pm
Absolutely. It needs to be totally quiet. I don't want to hear anything or anyone.
Thanks Debbie!
Thanks Debbie!
20th Aug 2024 3:08pm
Could it be that there is a "hidden high" created by knowing someone is interested....Hugs and love, Oral
20th Aug 2024 3:10pm
True but when you're interrupted numerous times, that becomes quite annoying! Thanks for reading and commenting
20th Aug 2024 3:12pm
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- Edited 7th Sep 2024 3:45pm
21st Aug 2024 2:17am
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21st Aug 2024 11:31am
Yeah. It's annoying. I have zero patience for it!
Thanks for the comments.
Thanks for the comments.
21st Aug 2024 3:37am
Man I feel you on this. Stay the fuck away so I can have that uninterrupted creative peace.
21st Aug 2024 11:32am
Exactly. I'll carve out sometime when all my thoughts are drained out of me. Thanks for the feedback.
