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The Death of Desire
The arson of my dreams,
was set by me.
A brilliant blood orange glow.
Down an abandoned wreckage road.
Night and her dark velvet invitations,
fuel my gasoline lamentations.
A self inflicted burn,
give desire a final blistering yearn.
Hopes and wishes compose
optimism's lather.
But dreams are now dead blackened cadavers.
was set by me.
A brilliant blood orange glow.
Down an abandoned wreckage road.
Night and her dark velvet invitations,
fuel my gasoline lamentations.
A self inflicted burn,
give desire a final blistering yearn.
Hopes and wishes compose
optimism's lather.
But dreams are now dead blackened cadavers.
Author's Note
Feeling dark.
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Re. The Death of Desire
16th Aug 2024 4:23pm
I see the darkness, Debbie. Like it. Hopefully the dreams will rise like a phoenix in its glory. For now let it burn. Fia xoxo
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Re. The Death of Desire
16th Aug 2024 5:59pm
Very dark but of course I love it! Your poems are always top notch! Great work my friend.
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Re. The Death of Desire
17th Aug 2024 3:38am
When it's darkest, you can see the stars. Or something like that.
Beautiful capture of how you feel at this point in time.
Beautiful capture of how you feel at this point in time.
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17th Aug 2024 1:08pm
We are all in the gutter but some of us are looking at the stars - Oscar wilde
Thank you for seeing beauty in the darkness
Thank you for seeing beauty in the darkness
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17th Aug 2024 1:08pm
We are all in the gutter but some of us are looking at the stars - Oscar wilde
Thank you for seeing beauty in the darkness
Thank you for seeing beauty in the darkness
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20th Aug 2024 11:04am
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Re. The Death of Desire
30th Aug 2024 11:49pm
This invokes a great feeling of motion.
It's very mysterious and vivid.
Regards James
It's very mysterious and vivid.
Regards James
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Re. The Death of Desire
2nd Oct 2024 7:29am
I have fought for my dreams too. But sometimes it is not meant to be. So I went with the flow.
Nice work.
Nice work.
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2nd Oct 2024 11:39am
Thank you for sharing your thoughts. Writing is my one dream that will not die.
Many thanks for reading and commenting. 😊
Many thanks for reading and commenting. 😊
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2nd Oct 2024 11:42am
Writing is a gift , one should not stop expressing. Not everyone can express their feelings.
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