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Birthday Candles
The candle light drove the shadows away
A joyous day
Your eyes seem full of life
No more strife or lines
Forever young
Your life has just begun again
Another trip around the sun
May this one be twice as fun
A joyous day
Your eyes seem full of life
No more strife or lines
Forever young
Your life has just begun again
Another trip around the sun
May this one be twice as fun
Published 12th Aug 2024
Author's Note
Just got inspired by a birthday cake
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12th Aug 2024 4:30am
13th Aug 2024 2:20pm
"Another trip around the sun" - is that line inspired by the earth taking a year to orbit the sun? Would be apt for birthdays for that reason.
Anonymous
18th Aug 2024 4:16pm
❤️👍
