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Miniscule Moments
Woven within the fibers of happiness
are those unexpected miniscule moments.
That saved you.
Were the brave you.
That made you stop and feel alive.
Moments that silence my heartbeat of agony
that pounds inside of me.
Summer days so lanky, so lengthy.
The years yearn to swallow time.
Reduce to just flashes of the death of desires.
Shine stained leaves in their sweet thrash.
Trees seductively shake and bash.
Days and years will pass.
It's within those miniscule happiness 's
that the feeling lasts.
are those unexpected miniscule moments.
That saved you.
Were the brave you.
That made you stop and feel alive.
Moments that silence my heartbeat of agony
that pounds inside of me.
Summer days so lanky, so lengthy.
The years yearn to swallow time.
Reduce to just flashes of the death of desires.
Shine stained leaves in their sweet thrash.
Trees seductively shake and bash.
Days and years will pass.
It's within those miniscule happiness 's
that the feeling lasts.
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Re. Miniscule Moments
10th Aug 2024 6:56pm
upbeat, positive, summer thoughts. Love the wording and the image. Nice work!
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10th Aug 2024 7:21pm
BUT GIRL... lanky summer days... that is (chef's kiss) so good.
Lovely as always. I loved the way you drew out the summer, and I'm seriously balls-deep in for the way you personified a day, and then pinpointed the moments.
Lovely as always. I loved the way you drew out the summer, and I'm seriously balls-deep in for the way you personified a day, and then pinpointed the moments.
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10th Aug 2024 7:27pm
I didn't know if anyone else would like that, lanky summer days, lol
What can I say but thank you so very much, you make me blush
What can I say but thank you so very much, you make me blush
Re. Miniscule Moments
10th Aug 2024 7:29pm
Hello beautiful Debbie I agree life is lived in moments what wonderful poem
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11th Aug 2024 8:35pm
Wow expressed superbly with fine word choice! Kudos for the poem!
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
Plz also read and comment my newest poem too.
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16th Aug 2024 2:55am
Excellent. Some poems just grab a reader and shakes them by their shoulders. This one does. It's uplifting (thank you!), it's relatable. Such motives aren't written about enough.
A very rewarding read.
A very rewarding read.
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16th Aug 2024 9:50am
Wow, thank you so much. I love it had that effect on you.
When it's all said and done, it will be those little happy moments we long for.
When it's all said and done, it will be those little happy moments we long for.