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Debby
I'm delicate, sometimes ferocious.
Think you've seen my tropical storm?
Babe, you ain't seen nothin' yet.
Just wait until I blow!
Watch as I descend,
Into a full blown hurricane.
You won't know what hit you!
You won't wanna be around me then -
BABY!
Feel the surge, this violent urge,
As I fill you with my flood.
Feel the torrent, my raging torment...
'Til you can't take it anymore!
Think you've seen my tropical storm?
Babe, you ain't seen nothin' yet.
Just wait until I blow!
Watch as I descend,
Into a full blown hurricane.
You won't know what hit you!
You won't wanna be around me then -
BABY!
Feel the surge, this violent urge,
As I fill you with my flood.
Feel the torrent, my raging torment...
'Til you can't take it anymore!
Written by
fianaturie8
(Fia Naturie)
Published 7th Aug 2024
| Edited 8th Aug 2024
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10th Aug 2024 00:03am
We all as women have a sweet and fiery side. We can be delicate as a rose and sharp is thorns. This is a great poem and to me, it represents the strength of a woman.🤎🤎
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11th Aug 2024 8:24pm
Hmm terrific but im a bit confused whether it is about a hot or hot tempered lady?? Kudos!.
I also am posting a new poem soon.
I also am posting a new poem soon.
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11th Aug 2024 8:29pm
It's a comparison of how hot-tempered the woman is. Thank you for commenting. I would love to look at your work.;)
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13th Aug 2024 3:00am
So it's a collaboration? I'm a bit confused. Lol.
At any rate, awesome idea of making the write a "personal" matter instead of simply a natural phenomenon. Giving it a human identity makes it more precise.
Great job.
At any rate, awesome idea of making the write a "personal" matter instead of simply a natural phenomenon. Giving it a human identity makes it more precise.
Great job.
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