deepundergroundpoetry.com
Lost Fire
I want to burn for you
I want to feel that desire that others feel
I see the longing in your eyes
I feel the want in your kiss
But there has been much
Much to undo
Much to forget
Too much regret
Until time speeds up
Or decides to rewind
I wait for the smoke
To signal the fire has
Returned and I feel the flame.
I want to feel that desire that others feel
I see the longing in your eyes
I feel the want in your kiss
But there has been much
Much to undo
Much to forget
Too much regret
Until time speeds up
Or decides to rewind
I wait for the smoke
To signal the fire has
Returned and I feel the flame.
Author's Note
Musings
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
likes 12
reading list entries 2
comments 18
reads 112
Commenting Preference:
The author encourages honest critique.
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 1:33am
Remembering these times, the words that were said that can't be taken back. Yes you really have to think after seeing the true nature of the beast. Tight
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 1:34am
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 2:41am
Nicely written per usual. Relationships always seem to get complicated. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 11:10am
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 3:23am
Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 11:10am
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 4:54am
Dear F,
This write hits the nail on the head for describing a troubled relationship in a healing phase. Beautifully written. H🌷
This write hits the nail on the head for describing a troubled relationship in a healing phase. Beautifully written. H🌷
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 11:10am
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 10:50am
Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 11:11am
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 11:25am
You can sense the passion between the lines. Definitely some sparks still flying, great poem!
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 11:26am
Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 1:30pm
Your mind has been wandering some interesting paths lately. This is so very relatable
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
7th Aug 2024 2:59pm
Re. Lost Fire
10th Aug 2024 2:53pm
I know something about lost love and am familiar with how that feels. This hit home with me. It's a well written piece! Appreciate you sharing! I'll be posting another of mine called; Lost in Me. It's similar in some ways. If you have a chance I'd like to get your feedback on it. Thanks!
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
10th Aug 2024 2:56pm
Re. Lost Fire
14th Aug 2024 2:00am
I love the angst of this one. Its not overly dramatic nor underwhelming. It's perfectly tempered. It has a mature sense to it. Well written!
0

Re: Re. Lost Fire
14th Aug 2024 2:01am