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Black tears in rain

All that remains  
 
The rubble and metaphorical blood stains
 
 
 
Silent screams echo down the halls
Suffering minds walls, visage cracked
 
 
Seven deuce dealt when the decks stacked
Hyper aware senses on edge awaiting the attack
 
 
floating through a super massive black hole  
Just the thought has certain appeal  
 
Giving a blind man a spoon to feel
Broken crippled bent
 
A little oblivion heaven sent
Who wants control when riding the wave?
 
Written by Carpe_Noctem
Published | Edited 7th Aug 2024
Author's Note
To those experienced past and present rock bottom
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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