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Peace
"To live is to suffer, to survive is to find some meaning
In the suffering" - Nietzsche
The majestic chiseled rock and stone,
was mysteriously lodged
between its ghostly white snowy bones.
Clouds strangely pale in comparison.
Hope has made itself known.
Rugged peaks distort the bleak.
This mountainous nectar
is what the weary mind seeks.
Orchard colored flowers, suspend the hours.
Peace, too, can devour.
In the suffering" - Nietzsche
The majestic chiseled rock and stone,
was mysteriously lodged
between its ghostly white snowy bones.
Clouds strangely pale in comparison.
Hope has made itself known.
Rugged peaks distort the bleak.
This mountainous nectar
is what the weary mind seeks.
Orchard colored flowers, suspend the hours.
Peace, too, can devour.
Author's Note
We suffer more in our imagination than in reality.
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Re. Peace
3rd Aug 2024 10:14pm
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Re. Peace
3rd Aug 2024 10:58pm
Your poem is outstanding, girl, but your author’s note…THAT is poetic gold.
I love this.
I love this.
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3rd Aug 2024 11:05pm
Thank you and it's very true. It's a hard thing to control in your mind.
But being aware is the first step. ❤️
But being aware is the first step. ❤️
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4th Aug 2024 00:45am
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Re. Peace
4th Aug 2024 1:54pm
As long as we live, there is always hope and the possibility of joy. Thanks for your brilliant reminder, and I completely agree. Most bad things we imagine just never happen.
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4th Aug 2024 2:09pm
I believe in hope and joy, even when our dark lacks light.
90 percent of what we worry about never happens
Thank you reading and comments.
Nice to meet you
90 percent of what we worry about never happens
Thank you reading and comments.
Nice to meet you
Re. Peace
4th Aug 2024 2:06pm
And that's an extra reason to make us escape into nature solace to heal, and to find peace!
Nice flow, very good vocabulary.Hamid's best wishes
Nice flow, very good vocabulary.Hamid's best wishes
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4th Aug 2024 2:10pm
Re. Peace
4th Aug 2024 2:53pm
Debbie my friend...What a marvelous piece of writing. Quiet, relaxing, soothing and what an awesome visual. Great work.
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4th Aug 2024 2:57pm