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Silence
I sit here in silence
with my heart beating as company.
Waiting for the sun to rise
and catch up with nature activity
Focus on nothing and everything
as quiet goes it's so loud here.
My mind is on a track
right now, at a jog with random thoughts
Shh I say as the librarian
in days of long ago
I must rise with the sun
silence is no more
with my heart beating as company.
Waiting for the sun to rise
and catch up with nature activity
Focus on nothing and everything
as quiet goes it's so loud here.
My mind is on a track
right now, at a jog with random thoughts
Shh I say as the librarian
in days of long ago
I must rise with the sun
silence is no more
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Re. Silence
2nd Aug 2024 11:32am
Speak and let people hear your voice. Silence is good to but when your able to voice your thoughts or what's on your mind, you could or might change someone's viewpoints or help them or give them some great advice.
Great poem, wonderfully presented and executed!
Great poem, wonderfully presented and executed!
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2nd Aug 2024 11:38am
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2nd Aug 2024 11:39am
Re. Silence
2nd Aug 2024 11:46am
Beautiful poetess, beautiful poetry, beautiful mind and spirit.
Safety, and happiness forever, Fia,
Hamid's best regards.
Safety, and happiness forever, Fia,
Hamid's best regards.
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2nd Aug 2024 12:00pm
Re. Silence
2nd Aug 2024 11:58am
The others have pretty much stated the truth through their praise. I'll just add that this was a great poem to read in the morning. Excellent.
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2nd Aug 2024 1:45pm
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2nd Aug 2024 2:43pm
Oof...this has been my mind of late. Noisy & rambunctious & I just need to sleep. Sometimes silence is deafening
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Re. Silence
2nd Aug 2024 2:50pm
I like the progression of this poem. We should speak who we are
Great write.
Great write.
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Re. Silence
2nd Aug 2024 4:10pm
You captured the way the world wakes up to uou, and you did a really lovely job.
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3rd Aug 2024 3:12am
You'll get though the day somehow, Fi, in spite of those spiteful silences!
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3rd Aug 2024 3:13am