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journey
i have traveled a lot at a young age
let me tell you,
i have had sex journeys with many people,
but I have never met anyone like me
i often think, what is lacking in me
or are people such that we should not expect anything from them?
can't I be as practical as them?
will the seeds of love never bear fruit?
will the seed be sown and it will remain as a plant?
do feelings really last for a long time?
do feelings end when you find someone else?
do feelings also grow old along with the body?
let me tell you,
i have had sex journeys with many people,
but I have never met anyone like me
i often think, what is lacking in me
or are people such that we should not expect anything from them?
can't I be as practical as them?
will the seeds of love never bear fruit?
will the seed be sown and it will remain as a plant?
do feelings really last for a long time?
do feelings end when you find someone else?
do feelings also grow old along with the body?
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Re. journey
2nd Aug 2024 12:08pm
This introspection is beautifully raw and well said. Love it Dimpy. Fia xoxo
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2nd Aug 2024 12:12pm
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2nd Aug 2024 12:34pm
Looking for love, for similarities, for anything in anyone else will always be fruitless. That has been my experience. When you know yourself, when you’re okay with who you are whether you’re alone or with someone else, if you’re okay with being alone and the possibility that you may always be alone, that is when you find freedom, peace, and others walking the same path you are. That has also been my experience.
You’re a beautiful, giving soul, dimpy. Keep questioning, shining.
You’re a beautiful, giving soul, dimpy. Keep questioning, shining.
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2nd Aug 2024 4:25pm
yesss, my story is mostly similar to yours mary..i have felt this many times...well thanks so much for your kind words.... Hugs n love
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There's a lot to chew on here and any answer will be unique to me and not universal for mankind.
There's love and There's sex and sometimes both. There's lust and there's feelings and sometimes both.
Then there's intimacy...
And caring ...
Whose to say why people connect and disconnect ?
I can feel your desire and yearning for more than sex. When you're doing stuff for each other because you you can and you want to help that person grow, then you know you have something real.
You've traveled a lot and had a lot of encounters but love awaits. Finding a mate that cares about you and you him.
That's the real search.
It's not easy to find but one must never give up trying....
I really like the depth and identity of your write. Confessional even.
Stay on course dimpy ....
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There's love and There's sex and sometimes both. There's lust and there's feelings and sometimes both.
Then there's intimacy...
And caring ...
Whose to say why people connect and disconnect ?
I can feel your desire and yearning for more than sex. When you're doing stuff for each other because you you can and you want to help that person grow, then you know you have something real.
You've traveled a lot and had a lot of encounters but love awaits. Finding a mate that cares about you and you him.
That's the real search.
It's not easy to find but one must never give up trying....
I really like the depth and identity of your write. Confessional even.
Stay on course dimpy ....
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2nd Aug 2024 4:30pm
as you know artist..i am hungry for sex and love. But I want to connect with someone emotionally...that search hasn't been completed yet...well I liked your comment :) n thank you for RL...
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Anonymous
3rd Aug 2024 2:37pm
The hunger for a connection beyond the surface with someone is as deeply ingrained in us as humans as breathing. We seek. Always we seek. Sometimes we find what we're seeking. The introspection in this piece is incredible
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3rd Aug 2024 4:00pm
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4th Aug 2024 8:00pm
Sometimes what we're looking for has been there all along.
Our choices christen every new path we take in life.
What we cannot see for ourselves might never come to pass.
Our reality is sometimes a reflection of what we're afraid of.
Our choices christen every new path we take in life.
What we cannot see for ourselves might never come to pass.
Our reality is sometimes a reflection of what we're afraid of.
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5th Aug 2024 2:31am
Yaa agree with you Dennis... Well it's a cute profile pic... :) I can see little dennis... may be...
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5th Aug 2024 3:08am
Brilliant write. Into the list it belongs. Just a top notch write. Appreciate you.
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