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He Walks

"Mmm, Nice."
 
Excuse me? Did you just catcall me?
 
I wasn't vulgar about it.
 
Started to walk away and stops
 
"You know you shouldn't do that to a man."
 
I cannot appreciate what I see.
 
"It's just that will get you in trouble."
 
Side smile
 
"Why are you smiling?"
 
Why do you not ask me what is really on your mind?
 
Turns away walks halfway down the street and stops. Walks back
 
"Alright what was nice that you had to say that?"
 
I like the way you walk.
 
What?
 
Your walk, your gate, you have a slight swagger and mind you just because you wear dress pants does not mean I cant see the imprint of your--
 
Stop. You are a woman you should act -- differently
 
I'm supposed to be shy and wait till someone approaches me.
 
That is not what I mean
A slight hue of color creeps on to cheeks. Readjusting to make sure he was not that obvious
 
Hey, no worries. No other woman can see what I see. My eyes just focus on that area. Bad habit. You should go to work.
 
"A bit of advice, don't that. The next guy will take it as an invitation."
 
Noted, now you should walk away, Tasty so I can get an eye full.
 
A flush of red goes down his neck., he turns and walks away awkwardly.
Written by fianaturie8 (Fia Naturie)
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Author's Note
This could possibly be in what I am writing now or not, I like to watch people. I love watching men in particular. Depending on their comfortability their walk takes a direction I do not even think they know they are doing it.
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