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Call Home
Hello baby
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
Are you busy
I really need you
I'm so tired of this reality
I need the comfort of you
Please don't ask me
what went on today
when that door closes, kiss my sorrow away
Look at me with those eyes
adore me like you did once
Let me breathe in the scent of your love
I stopped breathing when I left you
Answer
Come home
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Re. Call Home
29th Jul 2024 9:43pm
Hahaha, after reading this they will most likely come back home. Great with the sampling of different styles, keep them coming, tight work lady
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29th Jul 2024 9:57pm
Re. Call Home
29th Jul 2024 9:54pm
Fia,
Brilliantly written. I really dig this. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
Brilliantly written. I really dig this. Into the list it belongs. Appreciate you.
DL
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29th Jul 2024 9:57pm
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Re. Call Home
30th Jul 2024 00:34am
Yes, I agree with an earlier comment. They will come back like lost sheep, wagging their tails behind them, lol. How could they not?! I see you are writing more romantic poetry these days. Another excellent write, Fi. 😊
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Re: Re. Call Home
30th Jul 2024 00:36am
Thank you. Billy. I will write something, but I need it to have that.....Bang. lol
Re. Call Home
30th Jul 2024 11:54am
Great honesty in this... have felt this way... more than I care to remember...
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30th Jul 2024 5:47pm