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feel
your painting
is just like
silent melodies
with horny colors,
that shows
purest form
of pleasure...
each color
ignites flame
within me...
they rise
and inflate
on canvas like balloon
n make me cry with need
n i squirm and writhe
to adorn myself
with those colours
by your white HANDS...
is just like
silent melodies
with horny colors,
that shows
purest form
of pleasure...
each color
ignites flame
within me...
they rise
and inflate
on canvas like balloon
n make me cry with need
n i squirm and writhe
to adorn myself
with those colours
by your white HANDS...
Published 28th Jul 2024
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28th Jul 2024 3:41pm
28th Jul 2024 3:55pm
hi fia
there are very few people who read me from their heart, who wants me here n you are one of them... love you😘
there are very few people who read me from their heart, who wants me here n you are one of them... love you😘
28th Jul 2024 3:58pm
I love where you are coming from with your pieces. Especially the slow-driving ones, that have a tender beat to them.
Love you back<3
Love you back<3
28th Jul 2024 3:59pm
Sounds like a good painting to inspire this write. Keep hanging out with artists.
They know what their doing with your needs.
BIG
They know what their doing with your needs.
BIG
28th Jul 2024 4:27pm
perhaps the reader is unable to understand for whom this stuff has been written... well big thank you...
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29th Jul 2024 6:23pm
I agree red can be firing, especially on lingerie. The colour of danger is also a temptation.
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29th Jul 2024 3:00pm
The poem runs on pure transparency,...
expressing a genuine and profound attitude.
Very good.
expressing a genuine and profound attitude.
Very good.
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30th Jul 2024 00:35am
You have a very sexy tongue. I'm burning up for you love. Keep on writing my sexy lady.
30th Jul 2024 4:24am
30th Jul 2024 3:50am
This sure is intense & I too like the idea of horny colours, if they exist. I guess I'm waiting for someone to paint them for me. 🤩
30th Jul 2024 4:21am
Life is all about colours, can say both are connected to each other...black is associated with depression and red is associated with love..hopefully soon someone will bring the colours related to your emotions... :) thanks snaggy for your comment...
