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Words
Drowning
Pain
Vermin
Stench of mistakes
Illusions and delusions
Fear and self-loathing
Just muttering and worrying
I don’t die
Regretting everything
This is for black out poem competition. Original poem by Dreamboy the title The Rat King with his permission.
Pain
Vermin
Stench of mistakes
Illusions and delusions
Fear and self-loathing
Just muttering and worrying
I don’t die
Regretting everything
This is for black out poem competition. Original poem by Dreamboy the title The Rat King with his permission.
Published 26th Jul 2024
| Edited 27th Jul 2024
Author's Note
This is for black out poem competition. Original poem by Dreamboy the title The Rat King with his permission.
All writing remains the property of the author. Don't use it for any purpose without their permission.
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26th Jul 2024 7:44pm
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26th Jul 2024 8:43pm
Very nice! It's such an intriguing challenge, isn't it? Good luck & see you in the comp!
26th Jul 2024 8:47pm
26th Jul 2024 8:59pm
Nicely done. I've never attempted black out poetry. But sounds cool, and you've done it well. Appreciate you.
DL
DL
26th Jul 2024 9:02pm
Thank you. If you want you can take one of mine and start erasing words to see what you get. Just mention I wrote the original poem. No harm in trying.
26th Jul 2024 9:04pm
27th Jul 2024 10:53am
Always a pleasure reading your poetry. Nicely executed. Good luck in the comp
