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Merchants of ire
Amplified silence
Stinging to the ears
The hollow depth of disgrace
Is pungent and raw
Unkempt desires afflicting the vessel
Knickknacks and pleasantries know no concept of distraction
I am lain out in the dark
Seething—
and tempered
Visions of denial jerk at the chains of capacity
Old memories stain the iris
No second chances to calcify the bone
I’m hardened—
by a taint of depravity that tickles my tongue
Stinging to the ears
The hollow depth of disgrace
Is pungent and raw
Unkempt desires afflicting the vessel
Knickknacks and pleasantries know no concept of distraction
I am lain out in the dark
Seething—
and tempered
Visions of denial jerk at the chains of capacity
Old memories stain the iris
No second chances to calcify the bone
I’m hardened—
by a taint of depravity that tickles my tongue
Published 25th Jul 2024
| Edited 29th Oct 2024
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26th Jul 2024 6:04am
Now that's an impressive and visceral line
The hollow depth of disgrace
Is pungent and raw
Wow I like poems that suck me in with strong imagery and you hit the proverbial nail on the head
Excellent read...thank you
The hollow depth of disgrace
Is pungent and raw
Wow I like poems that suck me in with strong imagery and you hit the proverbial nail on the head
Excellent read...thank you
26th Jul 2024 11:38am
26th Jul 2024 11:54am
Unkempt desires afflicting the vessel
Visions of denial jerk at the chains of capacity
Some fine poetic style adorn your poem, adding much more eloquence and depth of thoughts.
Nice work as usual.
Visions of denial jerk at the chains of capacity
Some fine poetic style adorn your poem, adding much more eloquence and depth of thoughts.
Nice work as usual.
26th Jul 2024 12:03pm
Thank you for this! I do like to dig deep. I just love how words strung together can create so many different visions and emotions. I really appreciate your feedback :)
