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A Prayer Before Sleeping
As I lay me down to sleep
I hope that death my soul will reap
If I die before I wake
No more suffering must I take
No one waste one single tear
I was never happy here
Should this be my final rest
Ill release this burden from my chest
Eternal slumber will set me free
Deaths embrace deliver me
I hope that death my soul will reap
If I die before I wake
No more suffering must I take
No one waste one single tear
I was never happy here
Should this be my final rest
Ill release this burden from my chest
Eternal slumber will set me free
Deaths embrace deliver me
Published 24th Jul 2024
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24th Jul 2024 12:43pm
24th Jul 2024 4:25pm
Dear R,
While a bit on the dark side of this prayer, I appreciated the direct and gut wrenching feelings. For me, this is a very sorrowful yet soulful piece. H🌷
While a bit on the dark side of this prayer, I appreciated the direct and gut wrenching feelings. For me, this is a very sorrowful yet soulful piece. H🌷
Anonymous
24th Jul 2024 5:31pm
I was given this necklace as a child. It was a cross, but inscribed on it was “now I lay me down to sleep, I pray the Lord my soul to keep, guide me through the night and wake me with the morning light”
I always remember it because I used to clutch it when I went to sleep. As I’ve got older and dropped certain beliefs I binned the first half, but still mutter guide me through the night and wake me with the morning light to whatever is listening. It feels comforting.
True story.
I like that this takes that traditional prayer idea and turns it on its head. It’s a bit of a fuck you in many different aspects - life, beliefs, the world, your head.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
I always remember it because I used to clutch it when I went to sleep. As I’ve got older and dropped certain beliefs I binned the first half, but still mutter guide me through the night and wake me with the morning light to whatever is listening. It feels comforting.
True story.
I like that this takes that traditional prayer idea and turns it on its head. It’s a bit of a fuck you in many different aspects - life, beliefs, the world, your head.
Thank you for sharing.
-M
