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Drum Beats
while the energy
transmission is
still in process
african beats
fill my house
grounding me
connect me to
my innate roots
until they deeply
vibrate inside me
tingling feelings
start at my feet
my hands until
they fill my body
with sensations
coming in waves
i let go of myself
let the beats take
me over deep into
the wind and trees
the forest the leaves
energy of the elements
transmission is
still in process
african beats
fill my house
grounding me
connect me to
my innate roots
until they deeply
vibrate inside me
tingling feelings
start at my feet
my hands until
they fill my body
with sensations
coming in waves
i let go of myself
let the beats take
me over deep into
the wind and trees
the forest the leaves
energy of the elements
Published 23rd Jul 2024
Author's Note
Senegal by Aleceo (mix)
https://youtu.be/IQbS4qJQX50
https://youtu.be/IQbS4qJQX50
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23rd Jul 2024 2:10pm
I feel this poem. I allow the beats to take me over. Listening to the link now. Fia xoxo
23rd Jul 2024 2:28pm
It means a lot you listened to the music & feel my piece. Thanks heaps for your comment 💕
23rd Jul 2024 2:29pm
Takes me back to Kenya... we visited a tribe and they performed a drum based courting ritual...
nice crisp write...
nice crisp write...
24th Jul 2024 11:28am
This piece taking you back to Kenya means a lot to me. Thanks heaps for your visit :-)
23rd Jul 2024 4:14pm
24th Jul 2024 11:28am
23rd Jul 2024 4:47pm
If you're into reading, Duende, I highly suggest 'Women Who Run with Wolves'.
I loved reading this, such a high vibrational context.
I loved reading this, such a high vibrational context.
24th Jul 2024 11:30am
I'm familiar with that book :-) It means a lot to me you love this write, thanks heaps.
23rd Jul 2024 5:11pm
I love the way the drum beats took you over into the wind and trees,
and forest and leaves. This was such a cool write. Loved it.
and forest and leaves. This was such a cool write. Loved it.
24th Jul 2024 11:32am
Smiles, so happy to hear you love this piece. Thanks heaps for your comment :-)
26th Jul 2024 3:09am
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14th Sep 2024 5:04pm
I'm a huge fan of music and the new rage for the past couple of years
are African beats. Great way to bring that into your writing. Loved it!
are African beats. Great way to bring that into your writing. Loved it!
16th Sep 2024 1:18pm
So happy to hear you love this one, this series was one of my favorites and therefore very dear to me. Thanks heaps for your comment and the reading list, I appreciate you 💕
