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Self Obsessed

Self-Obsessed  
 
You are a top model  
the perfect specimen  
the most beautiful person  
among all the presence  
-----  
 
You are a nice man,  
Generous, and friendly  
A rare gem on earth  
And you are my favorite  
Objective and sincere  
-------  
And, you are a charming woman  
Your smile is so attractive  
And you have a big heart  
You are so empathic  
And you are the woman  
Every man wants to have  
*******  
 
*******  
How do you feel after all this praise  
How do you feel after a shower of compliments,  
After being so warmly flattered?  
 
You smile?, aha! i see you are satisfied  
So proud of yourself, so obsessed,  
Haunted by a self ghost from within you  
 
So listen to me now: '' you are the most disgusting creature on earth,  
the most vicious person that i ever met..  
And you lady, you are uglier beside Quasimodo."..  
 
 So, how do you feel after all that spit, that diatribe, that tirade  
do you still the same nice person i just complimented, ???  
 
I do not think so, even when you are not such beauty,  
 or even  not such ugliness,..you lose your temper easily, why.?...  
tell me this in your poetry and be as honest as can be, show me your true  " Self "  
 
Tell me that all you write will undoubtedly reflect your very self not  
the one that you ever long for, or the one you can not reach.  
or the one that you do not think you are,  
And, i am quite sure that due to your self obsession,  
my words hurt you do deeply,simply because, you are so much deeply self obsessed. shielded behind a childish ego, that requires time and patience to grow..
 
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Written by poeticdelight (Hamid)
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