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Sad Night
On this
Cold
And sad night
This girl
Lies in her bed
And cries
From the pain
That her first love
Caused her
He took her heart
And led her on
Than broke her heart
And left
He's gone
Everytime
This night comes
She drinks away
Her problems
Until she passes out
From sorrow
But tonight..
She goes to her window
And crawls out
On her roof
She looks out
Into the night
And she walks
Toward the edge
She jumps off
And throws her life all away
Cold
And sad night
This girl
Lies in her bed
And cries
From the pain
That her first love
Caused her
He took her heart
And led her on
Than broke her heart
And left
He's gone
Everytime
This night comes
She drinks away
Her problems
Until she passes out
From sorrow
But tonight..
She goes to her window
And crawls out
On her roof
She looks out
Into the night
And she walks
Toward the edge
She jumps off
And throws her life all away
Published 11th May 2012
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11th May 2012 1:57am
I believe that love can sometimes make us blind and depending on the severity of the hurt, can lead to death. This is a great poem, but I think it's too tame to be considered as extreme content
11th May 2012 3:58am
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