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Just Be
There was a lurid green sheen
to the ancient creek.
Sweetly haunted by
the secret summer reflections
of the leaves.
The sunbeams form brilliant white ripples
on the surface of the cool languid water.
What a perfect location for peace to loiter.
The gliding geese pepper the creek,
a visual feast of their natural pageantry.
I decided to just be.
In the moment.
In the immediate journey.
Let past and future worries flee.
to the ancient creek.
Sweetly haunted by
the secret summer reflections
of the leaves.
The sunbeams form brilliant white ripples
on the surface of the cool languid water.
What a perfect location for peace to loiter.
The gliding geese pepper the creek,
a visual feast of their natural pageantry.
I decided to just be.
In the moment.
In the immediate journey.
Let past and future worries flee.
Author's Note
The photo was taken today, blasted heat
Geese trying to stay cool.
I'm trying to shed some anxiety.
Geese trying to stay cool.
I'm trying to shed some anxiety.
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Re. Just Be
7th Jul 2024 6:53pm
Re. Just Be
7th Jul 2024 9:18pm
D-Bear this was uplifting and as beautiful as you are. The scene was perfectly set and you matched that nature like a boss bitch!
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7th Jul 2024 10:35pm
Re. Just Be
7th Jul 2024 9:20pm
Beautiful photo and sentiments. The combination helped my anxiety. Thank you.
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7th Jul 2024 10:37pm
That is the greatest compliment you can give me, if I helped just one person ease their mind
Thank you
Thank you
Re. Just Be
7th Jul 2024 9:37pm
Great pic!
Greater write.
I really enjoy your nature enthused writes. I'm a country boy at heart, forever, and your writes take me where life is peaceful and better.
Greater write.
I really enjoy your nature enthused writes. I'm a country boy at heart, forever, and your writes take me where life is peaceful and better.
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7th Jul 2024 10:40pm
I'm so happy I can share some of the deep peace I find in nature.
Honestly I'm just searching for a place that is peaceful and better.
Thank you so much for your comments.
Honestly I'm just searching for a place that is peaceful and better.
Thank you so much for your comments.
Re. Just Be
8th Jul 2024 00:08am
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8th Jul 2024 00:52am
Re. Just Be
8th Jul 2024 00:11am
If I want to look for serenity I look for Deliabear. Relaxing, gentle, pleasant. One with nature and all of it's beauty. Wonderful poem, great photo.
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8th Jul 2024 00:51am
Aww. That's a really nice thing to say.
Nature may be my niche.
Thank you so much!
Nature may be my niche.
Thank you so much!
Re. Just Be
8th Jul 2024 2:13am
Everything they said.
Your writes always take me exactly where you are and that’s a gift. Thank you.
Your writes always take me exactly where you are and that’s a gift. Thank you.
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8th Jul 2024 8:50am
Re. Just Be
9th Jul 2024 10:54am
When looking at such beauty, the best thing you can do is just be.
Love this piece and how gorgeous is that photo with those geese 💕
Love this piece and how gorgeous is that photo with those geese 💕
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9th Jul 2024 12:40pm
Thank you so much. I take my mom to feed the ducks and geese there.
Thx for checking out.
We all need to - just be as much as we can
Thx for checking out.
We all need to - just be as much as we can
Re. Just Be
11th Jul 2024 4:16am
Geese are evil. I have goose-phobia! The hissing! The snakey neck!
But the pic is great.
The poem is great
YOU are great
But the pic is great.
The poem is great
YOU are great
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11th Jul 2024 11:52am
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