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Lake McDonald
Beneath the clearest
ethereal glow,
The unique stones
are deep desires thrown.
To become the mystery
of the lake's bones.
Pale blue pristine
soul cleansing water.
My bare feet
wade in a country of boulders.
The glistening blue mimicks
a translucent navy sky.
That thinly veils
supreme peace divine.
ethereal glow,
The unique stones
are deep desires thrown.
To become the mystery
of the lake's bones.
Pale blue pristine
soul cleansing water.
My bare feet
wade in a country of boulders.
The glistening blue mimicks
a translucent navy sky.
That thinly veils
supreme peace divine.
Published 16th Jul 2024
Author's Note
Pic is of Lake McDonald, Montana
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16th Jul 2024 4:30pm
Goddamn I want to go! C'mon Debbie. I'll meet you today. Amazing poem. Amazing image.
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18th Jul 2024 7:30am
First off: what a gorgeous photo!!! We don't have lakes and mountains like those in the Netherlands, it's truly breathtaking to watch 🙏🏻
Your poem is equally amazing, your nature pieces are my favorites on here and this gem is probably one of my favorites of yours so far. Sidenote: ever since I was little I took stones with me from almost every walk and I still take stones with me occasionally. I have quite a collection by now, but those stones in the blue divine: WOW. Can't love this piece and your photo enough 💙
Your poem is equally amazing, your nature pieces are my favorites on here and this gem is probably one of my favorites of yours so far. Sidenote: ever since I was little I took stones with me from almost every walk and I still take stones with me occasionally. I have quite a collection by now, but those stones in the blue divine: WOW. Can't love this piece and your photo enough 💙
18th Jul 2024 11:48am
That is so nice to hear! Glad I could show you a beautiful part of USA.
You are not the only one taking stones, lol
I like describing nature, with a descriptive photo
so I can bring the joy I feel to other people.
Thank you for sharing with me and such nice feedback.
What is your favorite part of The Netherlands? 😊
You are not the only one taking stones, lol
I like describing nature, with a descriptive photo
so I can bring the joy I feel to other people.
Thank you for sharing with me and such nice feedback.
What is your favorite part of The Netherlands? 😊
18th Jul 2024 1:22pm
D-Bear, as always, this is d-lightful. The photo is really lovely. I appreciate the effort you take pairing a thought to a natural setting.
Lovely
Lovely
18th Jul 2024 1:24pm
